In many places, new homes are needed, but only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this?

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In many places, new homes are needed, but only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.

What is your opinion about this?

Due to rapid urbanization in last couple of decades more and more people are moving to the cities. Owing to this fact cities are running out of space and expanding their boundaries to fulfil the demand of new homes. Growing number of people assert that we should preserve countryside by not constructing new buildings there. This essay will assess different views and try to draw some opinion.

One of the major argument is, if we start converting green lands to the concrete buildings, it will make an adverse impact on our environment. Consequently, this will reduce the land which is being used for vegetation and agriculture. Another major drawback of building suburbs would be more time in commuting to work which might lead to stress and lower work-life balance.

Turning to the other side, not building houses outside will lead to dearth of the land for building new homes. As a result, municipal will be compelled to build high-rise building which lead to higher population density. Moreover, this will add to more traffic congestion and shoot up the real estate prices which will worsen the livability index of cities. A solution is to government to create more job opportunities in the rural areas to lower the need of the more houses in the cities. Although it is very long term process, there are very few alternatives government have.

In conclusion, it's highly unlikely that current availability of the land in the city can accommodate the new requirement. In my opinion, though I agree that there are environmental impacts on utilising the country side space, building high-rises can't solve this issue. However, municipal should appoint special people for town planning for new areas, who will work to nullify the ill-effects on environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'alternatives'' or 'alternative's'?
Suggestion: alternatives'; alternative's
...y long term process, there are very few alternatives government have. In conclusion, its...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...country side space, building high-rises cant solve this issue. However, municipal sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06872852234 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74943297417 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601374570447 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.266467065 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251590048431 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851949991426 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561344535049 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159573206856 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696416074847 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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