You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the training course you want to do
• explain what the company could do to help you
• say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Mr. Hasani,
I am writing with regard to a new educational course I have met at the AMT website and I am writing to ask for your kind permission to apply for this course.
As I mentioned, I saw this advertisement at the AMT website which as you now is offering the most modern technology in the file of gas turbine manufacturing. This course is about the last version of the protective coating of the gas turbine component and this is the reason that I am really keen on to apply. According to the curriculum, a different type of coating would be introduced and discussed as well as the state-of-the-art of repair method.
I would appreciate it if you permit me to attend this course. Since it would be held in their company for 5 days, I need to travel there which requires a valid visa and arranging for accommodation.
With regard to the benefits of this course, I should say that a great deal of knowledge would be transferred which leads to significant development in our production process. In other words, I estimate that most of our questions will be answered and the quality of our products will boost considerably.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Yalda Asgari.
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| 2023-01-28 | ielts_tony | 89 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, as well as, in other words, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80821917808 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99088500814 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570776255708 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9600907045 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7272727273 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9090909091 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238829172147 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996853581458 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861621003523 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143478379425 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961459518272 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.