Dear Manager,
I an employee of your company, working as a sales executive, want to bring to your notice about the training course which I have recently viewed online, which would also beneficial for our company, For this reason, I want to join the training course which will start from next month.
As I am interested to do such training course which is on the topic " Personal skill development in marketing". I would like to enroll in this course, which in turn also helps with my current designation and also for the company. The period of the course is 15 days from Date:01.10.2021 to 15.10.2021.
I request you to grant me to attend the training course for which I will be very thankful to you. In this regard allow me to be a part of the course. As it will be useful for my speaking skills in the present situation.
I need to develop the customer wants for the product for which I need to develop the skill which I am lacking behind to give the customer need.
thanking you,
Yours Faithfully,
John.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
Dear Manager, I an employee of your company, working as a ...
^^
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[2]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ich I need to develop the skill which I am lacking behind to give the customer need. than...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanking
...king behind to give the customer need. thanking you, Yours Faithfully, John.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58695652174 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66009153161 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9489313273 44.8134815571 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 4.34317383033 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385549493861 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148413151001 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108061292667 0.0603063233224 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210592387064 0.12726935374 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971888872994 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.