You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Mr. Jones,
I recieved approval letter from world science society which approving my request to join a seminar on "World science, roadmap of next decade". In the letter, it has been mentioned that you will be single point of contact, in case participants seek more detailed information on the seminar. I am writing this letter to raise few queries which you may clarify.
First of all i would like to know about dates and duration of the program. In in initial advertisement, it was mentioned that tentative schedule will be in March 2021 and dates will be finalized after consulting participants. It will be great if seminar can be held either first or second week of march as March end is year end closing and generally very time for us. In addition, will there be any prior preparation required for the program for example - dress code etc, please inform me in advance such that i can prepare for it. Regarding accomodation, will it be individual room or twin sharing for fellow scientistis? Furthermore, will accomodation be near to seminar hall or we need to travel to get to the destination. Finally, i would like to know overall cost for whole program. I need a quote to get pre-approval from my department and get it budgeted for FY21-22.
Looking forward to your response on my queries.
Warm Regards,
Shailabh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, may, regarding, second, so, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8864628821 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87459703759 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0173623009 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241947829807 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083693947928 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693115690943 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124861703482 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887881024967 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.