Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month You are not happy about this Write a letter to your insurance company In your letter explain Why you are writing to the

Essay topics:

Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain: Why you are writing to them?
Why you think the insurance should not be increased?
What you want them to do?
Write at least 150 words

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in connection with the amount I should pay for my insurance car monthly. Informed by your side the guarantee for my car changed and should to purchase another money for it. Due to there is no explanation for this statement, therefore I want to express my dissatisfaction for this updated.
In the very outset, I booked for the golden category, as you know it is the highest, to make sure I received a good service when I face a problem. When I signed for our yearly contract between me and your company, there is no item talked about changed in monthly money, due to this I built my money budget. From my side, it is impossible to pay any another cent for this.
Due to the contract, I asked you to provide a clear analysis for this update to convince me to increase my insurance, so I will pay the same amount of money until received it. Ultimately, I hope you to share with me the contact for who is in charge of to follow up this issue.
I am looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully, Awad Elshikh

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43076923077 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62030708209 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2044245622 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279045789199 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114073739115 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363315873492 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15545948372 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028008176091 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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