Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed for the decided time but you want to stay there for more time.
Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter mention
What you have done during the training period
What benefits you have received from the training.
Why you want to overstay there.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter t0 request you for an extension of my USA ‘s stay for further training in ‘advance usage of kubernetes and its application in computer microservices. I am glad to inform you that , I have successfully completed ‘fundamentals of Docker Applications’ training and I have also appeared for the certification exam. I have cleared it with distinction.
This training I underwent would be very helpful to us, as we can apply this knowledge in new projects successfully with minimum supervision. Docker applications is the new trending technology for safe application design requested by many users. I can now independently develop basic to intermediate level of such applications.
However, I am requesting for extension for training I mentioned above because that will provide us the edge to create excellent user friendly applications. I believe after this training I can easily guide our team members in docker and kubernetes related works.
Looking forward for you approval for the same.
Yours Faithfully,
Kamalpreet
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| 2019-02-06 | Kamalpreet24 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter t0 request you ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...roservices. I am glad to inform you that , I have successfully completed 'fun...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls of Docker Applications' training and I have also appeared for the certifi...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o appeared for the certification exam. I have cleared it with distinction. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55421686747 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54585074106 2.54303337028 139% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668674698795 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.080388729 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274220575043 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10541166894 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981419288375 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17539456585 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116561619989 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 8.71597938144 168% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.