Some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give
There are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that people are depending on others while other emphasizes that individuals are becoming self-dependent in their lives. However, I believe that nowadays modern lifestyle has forced us to be more independent than people were in the past.
There are two prominent reasons why it could argued that we are dependent on each other shoulders. First and foremost is that life has become more complex and difficult due to heavy competition in every aspect of sector around the world. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for buying a house as property rises have been increasing day-by-day and without them it would be an impossible to pay a deposit and mortgage the property. Secondly, many working professionals are staying busy and working extra hours in their company due to heavy competition in the market as everyone desire a better quality of lifestyle. This means, both parents are working full-time and they depend the support of grandparents to babysit their child as well as look after the homes.
On the other hand, I would concur myself in the opinion of individuals leading an independent lifestyle nowadays due to several number of reasons. Chiefly, families are becoming smaller and getting dispersed which means people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to do in the past. Besides, we have more freedom while living far away from our home towns. To cite an example, many students travelling abroad for getting a better tertiary education from top-tier colleges instead of going to the local universities. Because, top-tier colleges will make a brighter and promising future of their lives. Consequently, an individual becomes an independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor is that in advancements of technology allowed us to work remotely and alone from anywhere around the world.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own viewpoint is enough to determine that several number of people are living a self-dependent lifestyles in this modern world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...of society vehemently deems that people are depending on others while other emphasizes that i...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
... are two prominent reasons why it could argued that we are dependent on each other sho...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...n independent lifestyle nowadays due to several number of reasons. Chiefly, families are becom...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...n viewpoint is enough to determine that several number of people are living a self-dependent l...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...r of people are living a self-dependent lifestyles in this modern world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15954415954 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77374972758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5277696604 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.733333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350939769781 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103527178431 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110041539951 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245540879896 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122412537415 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...of society vehemently deems that people are depending on others while other emphasizes that i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'argue'
Suggestion: argue
... are two prominent reasons why it could argued that we are dependent on each other sho...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...n independent lifestyle nowadays due to several number of reasons. Chiefly, families are becom...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'several numbers'.
Suggestion: several numbers
...n viewpoint is enough to determine that several number of people are living a self-dependent l...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'lifestyle'?
Suggestion: lifestyle
...r of people are living a self-dependent lifestyles in this modern world.
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15954415954 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77374972758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561253561254 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5277696604 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.733333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350939769781 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103527178431 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110041539951 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245540879896 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122412537415 0.056905535591 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.