Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well known people Write an email to the bookshop In your email Suggest a speaker Say what theu would contribu

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Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an email to the bookshop. In your email
Suggest a speaker
Say what theu would contribute to the event
Explain why other people would be intrested too

Dear Mr. John

I am inscribing this missive to suggest guest speaker for the coming event. I am living in Street no. 4, New Parwana Nagar.

I would recommend to call Mr. Chetan Bhagat as a hounrable speaker as you know, he is a very renown writer in addition to it he is a very good speaker too. I have seen some of his interview on television and his presentation of information is very impressive like his writing.

As I said, by him as a speaker, he could guide our local writer about basic of writing and also after end of speaking session, we can have small question and answer session in which our society can clear their doubt about writing and miss understanding related to it and by only displaying his name, people will attracts towards seminar and after releasing movie based on his novel he is quiet famous with youngsters also.

Hope you will like my suggestion and I look forward to seeing him at seminar.

Thanking you

Kind Regards

Anand Dixit

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... in Street no. 4, New Parwana Nagar. I would recommend to call Mr. Chetan Bhag...
^
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on to it he is a very good speaker too. I have seen some of his interview on tele...
^
Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'attract'
Suggestion: attract
...y only displaying his name, people will attracts towards seminar and after releasing mov...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ovel he is quiet famous with youngsters also. Hope you will like my suggestion an...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50453413644 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.379468764 44.8134815571 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728609849945 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281378021015 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359119925102 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.046076160038 0.12726935374 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225488913423 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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