Some parents buy their children large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
FAVORITISM FOR INDOOR LEISURE ACTIVITIES HAS ESCALATED OVER TIME. A GROUP OF GUARDIANS PROVIDE THEIR KIDS WITH AMPLE OF TOYS TO PLAY. THE AVAILABILITY OF WIDE RANGE OF SUCH EQUIPMENTS ON THINGS HAVE THEIR OWN MERITS AND DEMERITS. THIS ESSAY WILL HIGHLIGHT BOTH SIDES OF THE SCENARIO.
THERE ARE PLETHORA OF BENEFITS TO CHILDREN FOR ACCESSIBILITY OF HUGE NUMBER OF TOYS. FIRST AND FOREMOST, PUPILS HAVE PLENTY OF LEISURE TIME IN THEIR CHILDHOOD. INDOOR GAMES KEEP THEM ENGAGED IN THEIR FREE TIME WHICH NOT ONLY PROTECTS THEM FROM THE THREATS OCCURING OUTDOORS BUT ALSO KEEPS THEM OCCUPIED. SECONDLY, MAJORITY OF THE TOYS HAVE THE AGENDA TO ENCORPORATE AND PRACTICE SUBSTANTIAL SKILLS AMONG THEIR CUSTOMERS. AS A RESULT OF THIS, THE FUN TIME OF THEIR DAY BECOMES PRODUCTIVE BY GROOMING THEM IN SOME PERSPECTIVE. FOR INSTANCE, GAMES LIKE PUZZLE; CROSSWORD TRIES TO IMPROVE THE VOCABULARY OF THE USER. THIRDLY, INCREASE IN NUMBER INTENDS TO UPGRADE THE VARIETY OF PRODUCTS. IN OTHER WORDS, CHILDREN RECEIVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO EXPLORE AND LEARN NEW THINGS. ENHANCEMENT IN HORIZON ACTS AS A BOON IN GROWTH AND DEVELOPMENT.
NEVERTHELESS, THERE IS A DARKER SIDE AS WELL. ENDULGING IN INDOOR GAMES PROHIBITS THE PUPIL TO COME OUT OF THEIR SHELLS. THEY MISS THE OPPORTUNITY TO EXPERIENCE THE MAGIC OF OUTDOOR WORLD. SPORTS WORLD GETS FAR AWAY FROM THE ENVIRONMENT. THEREFORE, THEY LACK QUALITIES LIKE TEAMWORK, UNITY, AND SPORTSMANSHIP WHICH ARE WELL LEARNT FROM SPORT ACTIVITIES. FURTHERMORE, DETEORIATION OF PHYSICAL ACTIVITIES MAY EMBARK HEALTH ISSUES FROM THE PRIMARY LEVEL ITSELF. IN A RECENT SURVEY BY CHILD DEVELOPMENT ORGANISATION OBESITY HAS SHOWN A REMARKABLE UPGROWTH IN YOUNGER INDIVIDUALS WITH THE MAJOR CAUSE BEING THE LACK OF PHYSICAL EXERCISE .LASTLY, WHEN PARENTS BUY HUGE NUMBER OF TOYS FOR THEIR WARDS THEY COMPEL THE NURTURING FOR VALUE OF MONEY .CHILDREN START BELIEVING THE EASE OF AVAILABILITY OF RESOURCES LEADING TO ABIDING ITS COST AND THE EFFORT TO EARN THE SAME MONEY .THEREFORE ,THIS MAY ACT AS PRINCIPLE ENABLER IN FAILURE TO MONEY MANAGEMENT IN LATER YEARS .
OVER TIME PARENTING HAS TAKEN IN ITS TURNS. RECENTLY, THE PROVISION OF TOYS HAS UPGRADED AMONG SOME FAMILIES. THESE ESCALATIONS HAVE SOME BENEFICARIES THAT HELP IN DEVELOPMENT OF THE CHILD WHILE THERE ARE FEW FACTORS WHICH MAY ACT AS A THREAT TO THEM IN NEAR FUTURE.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, lastly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18372703412 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78817932903 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603674540682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 92.8808208454 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8695652174 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5652173913 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264037718184 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602455849062 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624886919193 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153997760464 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185950794161 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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