Your local newspaper is going to held a competition to reward the best person who has done the most to help local community. Letter to editor.
In your letter, you should tell:
who the person is
how you know this person
how he/she has helped the community
why you think the person could win this competition.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter in connection to the competition for rewarding the ideal person who has made the most contributions to our community.
I would like to introduce you Xiao Han who is my colleague and the leader of Xiao Han Volunteer Group. I have known her for over 6 years since I started to work in my current company. She is a friendly lady and she provided plenty of assistance to my work.
She teamed up with several friends and established the Group approximately 5 years ago. She has been leading the group and offering aids to local residents who are aged or sick. In addition, her group also provide food and daily supplies to unemployed or even homeless citizens who could not afford them.
Based on her accomplishment, I believe she deserves the prize. She has done so much for the locals and I never know anybody who has done a better job than she did.
I hope you could take Xiao Han into consideration and I definitely hope she could win.
Yours faithfully,
Jerry Wang
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the leader of Xiao Han Volunteer Group. I have known her for over 6 years since I...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed the Group approximately 5 years ago. She has been leading the group and offering...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62841530055 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68950179939 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9828405174 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218892822668 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731462315662 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612049905598 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114944427255 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664656961977 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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