Some people prefer to live in hot climates, whereas others love the lifestyle in countries with cold climate. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.
It is always controversial for people to select their ideal places to live. Some prefer living in a warmer area, while others would like to stay in a cooler place. In my own perspective, it is reasonable for both opinions.
On the one hand, by living in a place with warm climate, people are willing to have more outdoor activities, such as hiking and camping. These outdoor activities can not only help them build up a fit body and stay healthy, but also relax themselves from the pressure in their lives. Apart from that, staying in a place with hot weather is easier for people to enjoy the natural scenery. For instance, Hawaii is one of the hottest states in US and also one of the most well-known tourist attractions in the world. Residents there can appreciate the beauty of nature on the tropical islands, such as beaches, forests and volcanoes.
On the other hand, people who live in a city with cooler weather can have a relatively quieter and more peaceful life, because they do not have to suffer the noises and crowds generated by a large amount of people. In addition, the life in a colder climate is likely to be more secure, since less resident may result in less crime and traffic. Moreover, unlike the fast-paced living in a place with hot weather, people are more willing to live in a slower pace as they are in a colder area, thus they are less likely to feel pressure or even depression, which is beneficial for their health.
To conclude, it is understandable for someone to choose to live in either a hot please or a cold area and it is depending on their personal preferences and living habits. Additionally, it it not as difficult as it is imagined for people to get adjusted to living in different climates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...rences and living habits. Additionally, it it not as difficult as it is imagined for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60450160772 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59631120578 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533762057878 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0005220997 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194238093547 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694102861843 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468010604197 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124455501056 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334370631787 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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