Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
In some countries, education fees for children are partly or fully supported by governments. Although this can cause some potential drawbacks, I would argue that these are more benefits.
One the one hand, there is a number of positive impacts when governments support for children's education. Firstly, free education will encourage more children to go to school. The school aims to bring children knowledge and moral values such as tolerance and sharing which are vital for them. As a result, well-educated children will contribute positively to society in the future. Secondly, it costs so much to bring children up; therefore, if governments support education fee for parents, these parents can have more money to spend on better nutrition and healthcare for their children.
On the other hand, governmental funding for children's education can lead some drawbacks. It is undoubted that governments have more important concerns. For example, State budget should need to be spent on healthcare and infrastructure, which may be insufficiently invested in if State spent more on children's education. Another drawback is that some paytaxers, especially those who live alone or who is childless may feel unfair because part of them is paid for the education of other's children. However, I am convinced that these negative consequences can be negated by contributions from children when they grow up.
In conclusion, I believe that national budgets on children's education bring more benefits than drawbacks.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250883392226 0.247107548796 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.137809187279 0.15552993741 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0918727915194 0.0946569551029 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459363957597 0.0501201869031 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0318021201413 0.0437536398559 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123674911661 0.122223957237 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0212014134276 0.0403219363162 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.2477146612 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0247349823322 0.0326786765898 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00353356890459 0.00163938923432 216% => Too many particles.
Determiners: 0.0600706713781 0.0861751148067 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353356890459 0.0214082191602 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212014134276 0.0119246538136 178% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1539.0 1933.38276553 80% => OK
No of words: 235.0 316.052104208 74% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.52118644068 6.10592293882 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20519365927 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382978723404 0.37474360046 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.348936170213 0.284197041944 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.285106382979 0.203843217982 140% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.212765957447 0.137313986986 155% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2477146612 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.560935902166 107% => OK
Word variations: 61.0398855176 60.7401812628 100% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0911823647 81% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0769230769 20.7725350517 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3541004212 49.5273876611 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6733870968 93.4120437189 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3185483871 15.2821509519 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.891129032258 0.594174754866 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01102204409 0% => OK
Readability: 52.9705400982 49.1922392462 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.83606557377 1.69127372897 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.203545864757 0.332604825255 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0673103902672 0.102734651613 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0523333495959 0.0668474354756 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542600134475 0.534917948617 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173174597586 0.148666948902 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880983178062 0.13441755203 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755929650123 0.0742828286743 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255582588856 0.324241079732 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0735545325402 0.0640056729886 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127206384158 0.22793763319 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522920511073 0.0582452615562 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41883767535 29% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.88977955912 170% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.60220440882 77% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9