Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
In recent decades, the question of whether or not the government should pay for children’s education has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this assistance is not without the disadvantages , the upsides will be far more significant.
There are a number of drawbacks of this sponsorship. first, since a sustainable development of a nation requires to have many investments in many fields, paying all of the costs for children’s education can put more burden on national budgets. In fact, the governments need to fund properly for many key areas, such as healthcare, economy, education, which implies that every citizen should shoulder the responsibility of paying for their children’ schooling fees. second, by supporting children’s education, either a part or all of the costs, the governments could create unfairness to childless people. this means that they may feel angry or irritated if knowing that their tax income is not spent on their benefits.
However, the upsides of this assistance will justify these. first, in order to flourish national economy, one of the most feasible solutions is the investment in children’s education. In other words, a large number of qualified employees who mainly contribute to national budgets will be trained, which lead to the sustainable development of nations. second, if government erases successfully illiteracy, the proportion of social crimes will be decreased. Plenty of evidences suggest that well-trained students have more opportunities to get decent jobs with handsome salaries, which reduce poverty and social crimes.
In conclusion, the advantages of paying for children’s education will be more significant. By considering all the pros and cons, government will have the best decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
In recent decades, the question of whether or not the government should pay for ch...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...istance is not without the disadvantages , the upsides will be far more significan...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...umber of drawbacks of this sponsorship. first, since a sustainable development of a n...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...many investments in many fields, paying all of the costs for children's education can...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...or their children' schooling fees. second, by supporting children's educatio...
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Suggestion: This
... create unfairness to childless people. this means that they may feel angry or irrit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
... of this assistance will justify these. first, in order to flourish national economy,...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ldren's education. In other words, a large number of qualified employees who mainly contribu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
...the sustainable development of nations. second, if government erases successfully illi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65441176471 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30777546454 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7199933816 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208381736112 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733178439493 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073366523958 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147624345007 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650582893361 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.