Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rior into the wild, development projects also affect the scenery and aesthetic na...
^^
Line 1, column 2459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... potential problem of tourist activities is that may generate harmful effects on ...
^^
Line 1, column 3317, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a western style" with adverb for "western"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s tastes, hotels are designed and built in a western style, small family restaurants become bars b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...storing and protecting natural habitats, which are being destroyed by expanding h...
^^
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e environment. A second measure would be for government to continue campaigns to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, in the first place
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 34.0 7.85571142285 433% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 50.0 10.4138276553 480% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 125.0 41.998997996 298% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5121.0 1615.20841683 317% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 965.0 315.596192385 306% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3067357513 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.57354906088 4.20363070211 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78613326882 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 479.0 176.041082164 272% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496373056995 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1585.8 506.74238477 313% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 14.0 2.52805611222 554% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 16.0721442886 286% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0336453123 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.326086957 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9782608696 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 21.0 3.9879759519 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150782244598 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330862891591 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280025270529 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882123647265 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451221887096 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 257.0 78.4519038076 328% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rior into the wild, development projects also affect the scenery and aesthetic na...
^^
Line 1, column 2459, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... potential problem of tourist activities is that may generate harmful effects on ...
^^
Line 1, column 3317, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a western style" with adverb for "western"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s tastes, hotels are designed and built in a western style, small family restaurants become bars b...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 434, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...storing and protecting natural habitats, which are being destroyed by expanding h...
^^
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e environment. A second measure would be for government to continue campaigns to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 34.0 7.85571142285 433% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 50.0 10.4138276553 480% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 125.0 41.998997996 298% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 33.0 8.3376753507 396% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 5121.0 1615.20841683 317% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 965.0 315.596192385 306% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3067357513 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.57354906088 4.20363070211 133% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78613326882 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 479.0 176.041082164 272% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496373056995 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1585.8 506.74238477 313% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 14.0 2.52805611222 554% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 16.0721442886 286% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0336453123 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.326086957 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9782608696 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 21.0 3.9879759519 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150782244598 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330862891591 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280025270529 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882123647265 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451221887096 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 257.0 78.4519038076 328% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.