It was predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than past. To what extent has this prediction come true?
There was a prediction that people nowadays would have more leisure time thanks to the advancement of technology. While this seems to be false, from my perspective, I personally agree with this opinion due to the facilitation of machines for cost-effective.
One of the advantages of technology is that it facilitates human on repetitive tasks. For example, in information technology domain, there is a job title so-called infrastructure engineer, whose jobs relate to provision servers and computers. Once all of the facilities have been deployed, the only left task is to maintenance and resolve any problems occur during the production since all of the components has been setting up automatically with the help of machines. Therefore, the engineers have plenty of free time to constantly upgrade their technical skills, and some even have a secondary job.
Furthermore, the world has experienced a large shift from office workplaces to work from home after the covid-19 pandemic, which are possible by the facilitation of the telecommunication and new technologies such as Zoom, Skype, Microsoft Teams. This significantly decreased the time for employees who live far from the company, instead of spending 3 to 4 hours each day commuting, people can utilize that time to work out to enhance their physical well-being or take care of their family.
In conclusion, the enhancement of technology offers people more time due to the convenience it brings to save a huge amount of time. From my point of view, people in the 21st will definitely have more leisure time than those in the 20th century.
- The natural resources such as oil forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate What problems does it cause How can we solve these problems 80
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- Nowadays people have expectations to get things instantly news products services and don t want to wait Why Positive or negative development 84
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- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21235521236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1257491164 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640926640927 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1221371139 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26444862303 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103517216442 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880955509421 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160900171811 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792707027839 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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