26.The rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in most of the world's cities can be attributed directly to the rapidly increasing number of private cars in use. In order to reverse this decline in the quality of life in cities, attempts must be made to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more.
Discuss possible ways to encourage the use of public transport.
Nowadays, more and more people are immigrating to cities. Therefore the demand for private car use increases as well. This reason causes traffic jams and air contamination in urban areas. Schools and government have a crucial role to play in solving this issue, by encouraging city dwellers to use public transportation instead of their cars. I suggest some ways to implement this in more detail below.
The authorities can limit the amount of time urbanites use their cars during rush hours. The Netherlands is one of the wealthiest countries that encourage people to use bicycles instead. Furthermore, increasing parking fees for private vehicles and decreasing the public ticket price are effective methods. There are many reasons why people dislike public transportation, including waiting too long for buses and walking too far when their destination is quite far from the station. Thus, public transport systems such as metros, trains, buses also need to be developed and expanded to more routes. The stations are needed to be constructed more as well.
To encourage urban dwellers to use public transportation, the government should raise their awareness about environmental protection, show them the benefits offered by public transportation and the threats posed if people continue to use their vehicles. Schools should also teach children about this, as they are the next generation, they will be responsible for the world in the future, and they need to know to protect the environment and themselves. Additionally, children are the ones who tell their parents when they are not aware of a problem.
Private vehicles are faster and more convenient, so it is difficult to break the habit of using them. However, until now, the best way to prevent air pollution has been to use public transportation. Consequently, I believe that if the government and every person collaborate, this is no longer a problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... more people are immigrating to cities. Therefore the demand for private car use increase...
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Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tions are needed to be constructed more as well. To encourage urban dwellers to u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25081433225 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96152296224 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2961952588 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8235294118 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153220650793 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519070252499 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036801808176 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973306698583 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290010737771 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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