Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Over the past few decades, it is widely recognized that modernism has changed the way we humans live. Many hold the belief that thanks to modern technology in tandem with advancements in sciences and other fields of society, the human lifespan has become longer and it is not hard to see why today’s world is worth-living than ever. This essay will examine how radically the way we human beings are living in the contemporary world has changed compared to that in the past and how ultimately the notion above is valid.
It is understandable how the proliferation of technologies has led to a drastic/ transformation in our daily lives. Thanks to the invention of many technological devices such as smartphones, computers and so on, people can now communicate, regardless of geographical restrictions and it is not hard to see how this is a welcome change.. In addition to this, with most labor-intensive productions are now being done by automation and robotics, which is very telling (adj/ n ) of how advanced modern technology has become, the need for manual labor has clearly been decreased. . Not only having relieved humans from/ of manual work but also, robotic technology has made its way into human households, and by using some of which such as robot vacuum, house work has become nothing but/ only an easy task. Therefore, it is safe to say that advanced technology has changed the way we live in a very convenient way.
Notwithstanding how convenient our lives have become because of mordern techonology, the advancements in science, especially in the medical field, have been of direct benefit to the human life expectancy. The much-faster development of vaccines is a prime example for this. Owning to advanced medical laboratory equipments, vaccination for fatal diseases is now researched and developed at an opportune/ timely moment compared to how slowly this process could take in the past. For example, scientists once had to spend 2 to 3 years to develop a vaccines for the H1N1 virus, which was a global pandemic in 2012, whereas recently it took only 3 to 4 months to figure out how people could be vaccinated against the Covid-19 virus which has proven more fatal than the H1N1 virus. On the same note, the fact that more people are enjoying longevity can be attributed to supplements and medical treatments which in the past were evidently scarce or even non-existent. Complicated health-related surgeries such as liver/ lung or heart transplants could possibly be operated these days, which was even somewhat unheard-of/ foreign
In conclusion, with all the evidence outlined above, I am totally convinced that mordern technology and advanced science have not only made our lives more convenient but also more able for us to live longer and thus, it is now the best time for us humans to live.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-08-16 | emkay | 56 | view |
| 2022-01-09 | longtran | 84 | view |
| 2021-01-29 | Kshee | 73 | view |
| 2020-06-18 | sudheerssmg | 89 | view |
| 2020-06-09 | thuan tran | 67 | view |
- 3 Some people believe that reading stories from e book better than watching TV or playing computer games for children To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some high school required all student to wear school uniform other higher school permit student to decide what to wear to school Which of these two school policies you think is better 73
- 4 Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country To what extent do u you agree or disagree 73
- 2 International travel make people prejudiced rather that broad minded what are its causes and measures What measures can be taken to solve this problem 89
- 5 People are surrounded by advertisement which has an increase effect on our lives Do you think the positive effect of this outweigh the negative effects 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many holds'.
Suggestion: Many holds
...sm has changed the way we humans live. Many hold the belief that thanks to modern techno...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strictions and it is not hard to see how this is a welcome change.. In addition t...
^^
Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...ard to see how this is a welcome change.. In addition to this, with most labor-in...
^^
Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d robotics, which is very telling adj/ n of how advanced modern technology has be...
^^
Line 2, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...anual labor has clearly been decreased. . Not only having relieved humans from/ ...
^^
Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a vaccine' or simply 'vaccines'?
Suggestion: a vaccine; vaccines
...ce had to spend 2 to 3 years to develop a vaccines for the H1N1 virus, which was a global ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s recently it took only 3 to 4 months to figure out how people could be vaccinate...
^^
Line 3, column 1041, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...uch as liver/ lung or heart transplants could possibly be operated these days, which was even ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch was even somewhat unheard-of/ foreign In conclusion, with all the evidence out...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2355.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94310012956 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7280119553 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.214285714 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6428571429 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20817765332 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803447498518 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468550464862 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138679419088 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412535172518 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.