The invention of mobile phones has been a revolutionary change in modern history. Now a days we can see that mobiles are no more an accessory but a necessity. Almost all the tasks can be performed on some mere touches on our smartphones. The mobile has been a controversial topic since its wide usage. With its impact increasingly affecting the lives of a major portion of population, it has been found that mobiles have proved both boon and bane for the human society.
To start with its advantages, mobiles have drastically improved communication. Now we can connect to anyone around the world very easily and in just a few seconds. It becomes very important to communicate in case of some serious issues like the transfer of medical information or some security issue. With mobile phones even the transfer of knowledge has become global and affordable. Data related to weather conditions, world news, national news, etc can be easily spread. It is an undeniable fact that mobiles have reduced the severe cases of misshapen since its invention. Now it is impossible to assume life without mobiles with its latest version, the smartphone. The mobile applications in our smartphones serves all purposes ranging from communication to entertainment.
However on the other hand, there are some ills to the technology as well. With the increasing use of mobiles the people are become more digital and less social. Now a days people have thousands of friends online but they hardly meet any. The people are becoming prey to loneliness. They connect friends digitally rather than meeting them personally. With the advancements in technology, there are also several negative usage of mobile phones. With the introduction of smartphones, there is a spike in various negative activities like pornography and cyber crime.
To conclude, it can be said that mobile phones can be a boon or a bane for an individual on the basis of how he opts to use it. So a considerable effort should be enforced on educating the people about how to use this super important tool.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...revolutionary change in modern history. Now a days we can see that mobiles are no more an ...
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Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...lutionary change in modern history. Now a days we can see that mobiles are no more an ...
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Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...re become more digital and less social. Now a days people have thousands of friends online...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t how to use this super important tool.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99418604651 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87906953263 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6554384075 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36363636364 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171628400187 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513690475976 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498206399805 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105675069429 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575709023097 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.