advantages and disadvantages of the use of organic foods
Using organic food has grown significantly over recent years. Although it has important advantages, there are some problems as a barrier to spreading out completely.
The two main advantages of organic food are producing more healthy food and environmental protection.
Firstly, there is no doubt that removing chemical fertilizers and pesticides leads to producing food of high quality. Since there is a strong correlation between healthier meals and the reduction of physical disease, lifestyles are changed toward the application of organic foods. For instance, digestion problems provoke more people to omit conventional food from daily diets.
The second main advantage is related to environmental aspects. Traditional agriculture relies on the consumption of different types of hazardous chemical-based fertilizers and pesticides, which might be to raise the level of soil and water resources pollution. Hence, it will have serious repercussions on both the quality of crops and soil grade in the future. Moreover, it can change the ecosystem by killing all of the insects that are necessary to do pollination.
However, agriculture methods that aim to develop organic foods also have some disadvantages. Two major of them are being more costly and unavailability in comparison with commercial methods.
It seems that modern agriculture with the purpose of organic food production will also be considerably expensive because of using sophisticated fertilizers and other required additives that certainly are higher priced rather than usual chemical materials.
As the last point, it is also true that the main agriculture process is still based on the traditional procedure which led to some difficulties to have appropriate organic foods everywhere you need. For example, it would be unimaginable to find organic foods in the majority of supermarkets or shops.
In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the potential of organic foods as a substituent for current options; But the financial and accessibility play as obstacles. From my point of view, organic foods, in spite of being healthier and ecologically friendly, the disadvantages are outweighed the positive effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 411, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... it can change the ecosystem by killing all of the insects that are necessary to do pollin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61746987952 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22131337331 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3809976588 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.705882353 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3752392661 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106873550876 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100175994689 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168093565062 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836212151137 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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