The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that the expansion of English as an official language in the world will reap more benefits than negatives. Personally, I completely agree with that view.
Firstly, English is a necessary skill which many employers and businesses require. In other words, the ability to mature English can help to seek a potential job . As the economy of Vietnam is focusing on collaboration with other countries, they always need a workforce that is mature about language apart from professional skills . In addition to that, English also plays an important role in education. Many high quality universities choose English as an admission subject in the entrance examination. For example, if the IELTS score reaches above 6.5 you can be directly selected for university.
Moreover, English is the main language used to communicate in all majors. Specifically, it is the dominant language of technology, science and medicine. Hence, English speakers can easily obtain and update the information in their daily life as the most important textbooks,research papers and journals are published in English. For example, Chemistry is using English to call chemicals in the new curriculum instead of Vietnamese phonetics. Therefore, students can access standard international resources so the education in each nation can be enhanced.
In conclusion, I fully believe that the advantages of expanding of English are more significant than the disadvantages as benefits of communication, education, economy and job prospects can bring to individuals and nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56302521008 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18824882272 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638655462185 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9435179503 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161365730647 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532787805857 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282705948967 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995864449841 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163157244487 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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