Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era, people start most of all their needs like books, air tickets and groceries from the internet and the popularity of this trend is increasing day by day. There are multiple advantages of this trend also some drawbacks. This essay will discuss both in the following paragraphs.
There are some drawbacks of online shopping, the local markets are becoming less famous. Individuals are purchasing from the online shopping so local business are more affected and they have less income, local businesses are going to stop in future if this trend is going continuously. The another drawback is that people cannot see the quality of the things which they buy from the internet. Sometimes they receive the different or worst quality from the internet.
There are multiple advantages of online shopping. Firstly, it reduce the shopping time, individuals do not have to go outside in the market, do not have to wait in the queue for their turn to buy air tickets, books and any other materials from the market, just open the website check the items and purchase it easily. With the saved time, they can do some work or spend quality time with their loved ones. Secondly, customers can check items from the different websites and compare the price and quality conveniently.
Last but not least, it can help to reduce air and noise pollution on roads. Due to online shopping, people do not have to go out from their personal vehicle or public transport, and reduce the traffic in the market.
In conclusion, although, there are some disadvantages of online shopping, it had a more advantages, which helps to individuals and also the world’s environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'reduces'?
Suggestion: reduces
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57617617283 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.2870683666 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223818411421 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683450829867 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459242099965 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11102442773 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473528211635 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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