All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?
Charged automobiles should substitute motorized vehicles and the government should outlaw such vehicles that combust natural gas. This essay agrees with the above statement because electric cars are more environment friendly and they are relatively economical to maintain.
Electric cars are more environmentally sound. They produce only about a third of the CO2 emissions compared to fuel operated vehicles, and thus contribute to lowering the greenhouse gas emissions. Decreased combustion from motorized cars will lead to a drop in the smog levels of hugely populated cities. For example, France has the largest number of electric car purchasers as they aim to replace the combust vehicles and lower their country’s contribution to CO2 gas emissions.
Battery operated automobiles are more economical to maintain. The maintenance and repairs of the installed batteries is much cheaper than the counterparts of the combust engines. Also, some states have set much lower taxes on electric cars compared to petrol run vehicles. This means that overall, it costs less to own and upkeep an electric car than a conventional vehicle. As a result, in Norway, according to a survey, increasing number of people are inclining towards purchasing an electric automobile to be their next car so as to take advantage of the lower taxes and the related facilities provided by the governments.
In my opinion, I agree that cars which run on natural gas should be prohibited and eventually be replaced by charging cars as these are more economical to maintain as well as have a lesser environmental impact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 528, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...lectric automobile to be their next car so as to take advantage of the lower taxes and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, third, thus, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96378385648 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5307192792 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270097507739 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098445751082 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708367026341 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180207399664 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523540056532 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.