All criminals should have access to get education and rehabilitation wile ij prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present, people having laborious time to assimilate a consensus on whether the prisoner should get education and rehabilitation or not. Albeit there are some robust altercations, nevertheless, I confide that people in jail have the right to get such facilities. However, I shall scrutinies my epistemology in the subsequent essay.
There are some factors that made me to uphold the idea of supporting education and rehabilitation for those who are in cell. The primary reason that needs to be taken into consideration is, if prisoner get access to educate themselves while in prison then they might get the light if responsibility. There is no denying that education ameliorate our sense and make us cautious. For example, if someone from the cell gets enough education, then as repercussion, they will be knowledgeable about right and wrong and will ot be harmful as education has such power.
Apart from that, another contention is, after the long time of punishment because of their law breaking offensess, they wish to to back to their houses. But unfortunately, poor prisoners can not get back, because most of them till become obscure and unknown to everyone. Society do not want to accept them. Owing to which, they start doing crime again. So it is fundamental for the authority to manage a place for those homeless persons. For instance, the bureaucrats can arrange a house and job for them so that they do not think about breaking legislation further.
However, despite the above arguments, some people do not deem that prisoner should be allowed to be educated and rehabilitated. They opine that, they are worthless and government should not disbursed money on them. Serious offender like murderer need to be kept in jail forever.
In conclusion, though people come up with logic against prisoner as they surmise law breakers can not be changed but I am optimistic that if they get proper take care then they will be efficacious and make the nation benignant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...their law breaking offensess, they wish to to back to their houses. But unfortunately...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'disburse'
Suggestion: disburse
...are worthless and government should not disbursed money on them. Serious offender like mu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05487804878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8944795042 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0022144838 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5294117647 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185330106147 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626608869565 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623568026148 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108699134181 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539272685381 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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