Nowadays more and more peoples tend to eat unhealthy food which leads to obesity and this problem is seen all across the globe were not only adults, but young people are also facing this issue there are many roots cause of this issue but some of these issues, however, there are some solutions to solve this problem, in this essay both the causes and remedies are discussed.
To begin with, the lifestyle of today's generation abundant facilities are available for instance according to a recent survey by held by the times a greater number of peoples tend to travel by vehicle for even short distance rather prefer bicycle or by walk.
Furthermore, eating junk food is commonly seen in societies which include adults as well as young people, for example, my younger cousin prefers to eat fast food rather than eating homemade food just because it tastes good but that attitude has led to an increase in his weight. Considering weight management, the peoples who are health conscious tend to exercise more often and keep their diet under control which leads to a healthy and active lifestyle.
Even though, there are many factors that cause obesity nevertheless following some fundamental principles will solve this problem to a greater extent some of the following are eating healthy and maintaining healthy eating habits, for instance, switching to food which has not only good taste but also great nutritional content.
Maintaining a diet alone does not solve the problem exercising regularly is vital; because it will cause the excess fat to burn and will help in reducing weight and even consistency is necessary for good results, another thing is having an active lifestyle for instance by preferring stairs instead of the lift whenever possible, preferring to walk while buying staples in this way more and more people will be health-conscious and obesity will not be a major issue.
By analyzing the causes and solutions all in all we can conclude that there are various factors causing obesity in our society and healthy eating and active lifestyle is the solution for this problem, and curing obesity will reduce the risk of other diseases which will lead to a healthy and happy society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 322, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...sidering weight management, the peoples who are health conscious tend to exercise more ...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... solve this problem to a greater extent some of the following are eating healthy and mainta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, another thing, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48326154517 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513586956522 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.843433236 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 262.285714286 106.682146367 246% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5714285714 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2857142857 7.06120827912 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232550993603 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109962172942 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826880036821 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127001592532 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765501938949 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.4 13.0946893788 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.55 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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