All students ought to study art and music in school. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
At the present time, art and music have become an integral part of human being. In the meantime, art and music should be fundamental in school for students or not have ripened into a highly debatable issue. Although there are some robust altercations against, nevertheless, I confide that art and music need to enrolled in school. However, I shall scrutinies my epistemology in the subsequent essay.
There are some factors to uphold the idea of supporting art and music are mandatory in school. The primary reason that needs to be taken into consideration is, abolishing of stress. There is no denying that art help us to get refreshments. Students of contemporary world lead a mundane life because of their study. Art and music can come forward to irradiate all this. For example, if students only focus on math and science then they may get stuck in between. But if they study music and art along all these then it will be benignant for them.
Apart from that, another contention is, art boosts self-esteem of students. By practising art they can accelerate their enthusiasm regarding study and become better concentrator. For instance, if a student listen to music in his spare time, then he might feel free and attend his academic subject better.
However, despite of above arguments, there are some people who might argue for not to include art and music in school as they prefer science and technology more. They opine that, only science can be efficacious for a country and for this repercussion, they oppose the idea of music and arts.
In conclusion, it can not be repudiated that what science and technology bring for us but to do this or to focus on these subjects students must focus on arts and music. In this way a student and a nation can be gratified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82026143791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68530626763 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539215686275 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9369877243 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267381804449 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906882614213 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607621499417 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156506556266 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514162894926 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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