Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with that?
More and more public parks and open places in cities are replaced by high rise buildings and shopping centres to meet the need of ever growing population in those urban centres. However, government and individuals can take various steps to mitigate this issue. Owing to the increasing rate of urbanization and modernization the enviornment of those citieis is facing problems such as pollution and deplantations.
To begin with, firstly due to the growth of population in urban areas, the plants and trees are removed from the public parks and this space is used for building residential areas and business centes. This, reduction in the number of trees leads to rising levels of CO2 in the environment. In addition, demand for cars have increased dramatically which is causing sever air pollution which is harmful for the health of citizens as well as contributes to the green house effect. For example, a recent report shows that increasing air pollution in Delhi due to the cars and industrialization has caused alarming health problems amonth the citizens. Furthermore, these escalating levels of harmful gases such as CO2 and CFC eventually contributes to global warming, which is a threat to our planet.
There are myriad of measures which can be undertaken by the individuals and government to reduce these ill-effects on the environment. Authorities should encourage plantation of more and more trees along the road sides and people should try and make changes in their lifestyles such as planting more trees in their garden as well reducing the use of car whenever possible. Government should promote the use of eco-friendly products, renewable energy resources like solar power and wind power. People should buy cars which uses eco-friendly fuels such as biodiesel or even switch to electric cars. Individuals should try and use public transports or bicycles for their day to day commutes which helps in solving the traffic problems. Government should charge high taxes on industries using fossil fuels as resources and producing high levels of CO2.
In conclusion, in my opinion urban centres are growing by leaps and bounds to meet the demands of growing population, authorities should pose strict laws and promote awareness among the citizens about the protection of environment. Moreover it is the responsibility of individuals to make their cities a better and safe place to live in.
- Some people think that the role of parents is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nurture their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up 73
- Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies.To what extent do you agree or disagree with that? 73
- The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, faminies, accidents and crime. Why do you think this is?Do you think the news should be a balance of good and bad news. 67
- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some think that computer skills be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 78
- Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time.What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
... along the road sides and people should try and make changes in their lifestyles such a...
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Line 9, column 617, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ch to electric cars. Individuals should try and use public transports or bicycles for t...
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Line 13, column 233, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ns about the protection of environment. Moreover it is the responsibility of individuals...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23772609819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88892124623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527131782946 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3687664274 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.6875 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1875 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185528222822 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575380486805 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525478765721 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100230702812 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389692784548 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.