Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time.
What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so.
Nowadays many parents boost their adoloscents to utilize their leisure time to do part time jobs while this trend has many positive aspects in child's development, it has it's drawbacks as well. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of motivating teenagers towards part time jobs.
Firstly, working aprt time will help develop child's personality into various dynamics, such as confidence, polished communication skills and realization of the outside world realities. They get to understand the importance of hardwork and money. Moreover, they realize how their parents have worked hard to nurture them and fulfill their demands which enables them to appreciate and respect the efforts their parents have put in.
Furthermore, working part time changes child's attitude towards life. It fills him/her with feeling of achievement and self confidence. They understand the importance of caring and sharing, teamwork with peers. Thus, it gives them a taste of future life and helps them to organise their life in a disciplined manner. Also, it keeps the child motivated to focus on future goals towards a successful life rather than getting distracted towards the negative influences around them.
However, there are negative aspects which should be considered. In this competitive world children are under constant pressure of parents, peer and teacher. If they are forced to work in their free time, it will affect the mental and physical development of the child. It will deter them from the opportunities to interact with the friends of their age. The fact they earn money can also lead them to spend it on anti-social activities such as smoking and alcohol.
In conclusion, even though doing part time jobs is beneficial for nurturing children with the qualities like co-operation, confidence, independence and courage to face real situations in life, the pressure can have negative impact on child's mental health. They are the tender buds of the society and they should be taken care off.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67802836757 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6492351272 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.117647059 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286087995956 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07989823439 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889823622891 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166354767612 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837774307975 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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