The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars, faminies, accidents and crime. Why do you think this is?
Do you think the news should be a balance of good and bad news.
It is certainly true that, in this 21st century conflicts among countries, natural calamities such as earthquakes, floods and typhoons, accidents and violetn human activities have risen significantly. It is often argued that the news channels and newspaper emphasize more on bad news as compared to good news.
To being with, there are myriad of reasons behind casting disturbing news on social media majority of times. On the one hand, the news reported by media is usually accurate, based on the actual fact. The incidences of war, natural disasters, accidents and violence are on rise. Media houses publish these news to make people aware about the things happening all over the world, so that they can take right precautions and measurements. Many parts of the world are hit by famines. While news channels and news papers report these incidences, these place get help and funds to rise out of the situation from all over the world.
On the contrary, these kind of news affects the inner peace and harmony of the spectators and readers, and creates unrest among them. People are discouraged from reading news and loose interest in them.
Good news often makes a person happy. When a person reads good things a sense of wellbeing and happiness is developed. It encourages positive attitude and feeling of security in an individual. I however fell that there should be a balance of good and bad news, so that people can maintain their emotional balance and do not loose interest in reading.
In conclusion, Although most of the news reported are bad, people should realize that there lies the truth of reality in it. They should find right emotional balance and should be motivated to read of kinds of news. Moreover, media should make sure that the content they present is unbiased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96013289037 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52304091872 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564784053156 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5596264 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41269683323 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125839657305 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102448454711 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225544674814 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517116601361 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.