Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree.
There are a lot of controversies, these days, about the importance of newspapers as a source of news. while some people are convinced that they will stay at at the first place even though they're more and more people reading online news, I'm strongly believe that the opposite notion is more plausible.
There is a common fallacy is that the creditvity and cultural value of newspaper is irreplaceable forver, even in a fast-paced society. Advocates of this view argue that newspapers express their inclusive value as an important physical documents of historical moments, a character which is by no means to be replaced by their electronic counterparts. moreover, they supposed that newspapers are much more reliable than tons of news on the internet as they are all official and proved carefully by the state. however, such a reasoning is invalid when almost only senior citizens who are, nowadays, not family with modern technological gatgets still subscribe for newspapers, but this figure will inevitably diminish over time because the electronic devices such as a smartphone or a television are becoming more and more user-friendly for people of all ages, even the old generation. Additionally, the governmental organizations introduced many official online newspaper applications which are very reliable and truthworthful, which means I'm not online news could probably detect over a newspaper in the near future.
Therefore, I am of the opinion that the world is moving in a direction where reading online news is the most prevalent thanks to its convenience and financial benefit. firstly, it is not only easy to approach but also super fast for the residents to access to the online news because Wi-Fi is ubiquitous and events or breaking news are disseminated almost immediately after they happen, which helps people to keep abreast with the latest news from all over the world elsewhere, just by a smart equipment with Internet available. Secondly, it is totally free to read news on the internet, so instead of paying money for newspaper, it is unescapable that people will read them online to lighten their financial burdens.
In conclusion, although opinion is large divided, I disagree with the view that newspapers will keep its most crucial role in Modern Life, where online news have taken over by dint of its technological and economic advantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18015665796 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91508952418 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545691906005 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5732698076 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.363636364 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8181818182 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393231012393 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142260126278 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751046938127 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240998635077 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817920258317 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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