Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, in motion with the technological developments in recent years, digital news sources have become the premiere information device for a substantial portion of the populace. Despite this, however, there exists the belief that it is of indisputable guarantee that traditional newspapers will continue to retain a foothold in the media industry, regardless of any surge in popularity of any competitors. Regarding my view on this matter, this argument has my complete agreement for reasons which will be further in the following paragraphs.
Various grounds for the preference for online reading can be given. First and foremost, one justification for news reading on the Internet is its convenience. In today's modern world, with the ubiquitous presence of Internet connection and the solid position of digital devices such as smartphones in the mainstream of the public, it is not of any great difficulty to see why it is preferable to use them for accessing information instead of going through the hassle of buying a newspaper. Additionally, these gadgets used to read online news are already refined and developed through years of production. As such, the technology has been perfected through decades of development, now capable of supporting substantial data alongside remarkable quality-of-life features and descriptive elements. These left notable obstacles for paper print to compete with, which they found themselves greatly hindered by, for instance, the considerable need for rapid publishing, the requirement for censorship or material supply, production or facilities, all oblivious to the digital realm.
However, there are also a wide variety of benefits traditional newspapers can provide. To commence with, paper reading material will give you a more immersive reading experience than their electronic counterparts. The account for this is the overwhelming number of distractions from applications' notifications that will inevitably affect your reading, potentially completely deviating you from it, while the risk of this happening for newspapers are nonexistent. In addition to that, using electronics to read newspapers can have detrimental effects on your health, as the light these appliances emit can cause damage to your eyes and neurons if exposed for an extended period of time, resulting in myopia or headache, inadvertently reducing the productiveness of your reading session. Hence, reading newspapers is advisable for people who want to make the most of their time gathering knowledge. Moreover, there would be situations where plain old newspapers will be the choice for avid readers. While the reach of our technology has stretched to almost every corner of the globe, it is not to say that Internet connection or devices will always be available, for instance, during a trip or a power outage, further strengthening the need for this information instrument.
In conclusion, even though being edged over by its online adversaries, it is not feasible to believe that newspapers will lose their ground due to the advantages it brings to the field. Therefore, it is most likeliness that both of these forms of media will exist parallel to each other in the industry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2709.0 1615.20841683 168% => OK
No of words: 496.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46169354839 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11498068632 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 176.041082164 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 846.9 506.74238477 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.4485061893 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287548617493 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879185334901 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496790568308 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153014522014 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626163122871 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 78.4519038076 200% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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