When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Leading to the 21st century there are common controversies about the allocation of the national budget to a range of important sectors when the citilization is ubiquitous. While some people are suspicious of the approach of developing public parks or sports facilities instead of shopping centers for citizens, I totally agree with this notion by the virtue of their comprehensive benefits to the public health.
There is a prevalent fallacy, these days, is that shopping mall should be more prioritized in order to accommodate the residents's consumer demand. Advocates of this view of argue that in a more society it would be much more convenient for busy working adults to buy the goods that they need elsewhere as more and more people have a trend of excess consumerism lifestyle. Besides it is supposed that has buildings also offer a wide range of creational activities for the population, especially the Young Generation, which helps them to improve mental health. However such reasoning seems invalid when many developed countries like Japan the minimalist lifestyle is becoming a popular trend, which contributes to the significant reduction of daily consumption. Moreover thanks to the rapid development of state-of-the-art technology, the shopping center has become trivial as people tend to buy products online, by this way they not only save money and time to go out but also get discounts sometimes.
Therefore I strongly believe that public parks and Sports facilities deserve more funding as these useful infrastructure would help the population to retain both physical and mental health. The national parks are ideal destination for people of all ages to unwind refresh and escaped from the bustling cities by a variety of exciting activities, from running to jogging, cycling to camping. Additionally the improved Sports Centers encourage people to do more exercise which does wonder for the population's health and contributes to the comprehensive development of the national valuable labour.
In conclusion, although the opinion is large divided, I am of the opinion that public parks and Sports facilities should receive more National expenditure rather than shopping malls because of their indispensable role in advancing physical and mental health for the public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39106145251 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95961815039 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578212290503 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8589685618 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.454545455 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308550912116 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106135239187 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704620576779 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19300676156 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392372087476 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.0946893788 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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