Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Innovative information technology has been escalating rapidly. Many people use this facility in daily basis to read news, to know world trade and trends and so on, however, news papers has a significant space in area of information services. In this essay I completely agree to the statement because, modern technology has some limitation which is absent in case of news paper.
Firstly, info surfing has been more prone to get when dealing with a news coverage in modern world. Make use of such information super high way makes life easier and well. Nevertheless, these technology some times makes worse with buffering, low speed, and failure to connect with server to read a news immediately, and effectively. Moreover, electric power supply distraction or disconnection also has a pernicious effect on readers. For instance, live news report from UN summit has interrupted by many viewers in 2014.
News reading is an inevitable act or somehow hobby of many people around the globe. Earlier, many houses were waking up by the entry of news paper boy on that much importance have in their day today life on news paper. Notwithstanding, as technology went up news paper has available online as similar to that of real press distributors. By the marvel use of ingenious system every one can read many kind of news reports at a time and by the virtue of that people use this facility to compare each other and enjoy with news in sort of written than vocal. Furthermore, perhaps, online news reports may missed news paper reports can read later as well.
To conclude, although, internet services and broadcasting would be indispensable many people were interested to read a news by paper or relatively online newspaper to grasp ideas and analyse the reports which is written in paper rather than verbal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 367, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...e limitation which is absent in case of news paper. Firstly, info surfing has been more...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...kes life easier and well. Nevertheless, these technology some times makes worse with buffering, ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...y houses were waking up by the entry of news paper boy on that much importance have in the...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ortance have in their day today life on news paper. Notwithstanding, as technology went up...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... Notwithstanding, as technology went up news paper has available online as similar to that...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... of ingenious system every one can read many kind of news reports at a time and by the vi...
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Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...perhaps, online news reports may missed news paper reports can read later as well. To c...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...issed news paper reports can read later as well. To conclude, although, interne...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...ble many people were interested to read a news by paper or relatively online newspaper...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99668874172 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76834064468 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4011102078 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246571117394 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859125895241 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528029751263 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150183312944 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321699019001 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.