An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's fast-paced world, people often find themselves caught up in the present moment, neglecting the importance of planning for the future. While some argue that it is essential to focus on the present, I firmly believe that individuals and society should prioritize the future over the present.
Firstly, preparing for the future is crucial for personal and societal development. By planning and making investments for the future, individuals and society can secure a better life for themselves and future generations. This includes investing in education, healthcare, and infrastructure to build a strong foundation for the future.
Moreover, paying more attention to the future helps individuals and society to be more proactive in their decision-making. By thinking about the long-term consequences of their actions, individuals can avoid making hasty decisions that may have negative impacts on their future. For instance, people who save money for their retirement will have a better chance of having a financially stable life in their old age.
On the other hand, solely focusing on the present may lead to short-term thinking and instant gratification. This can result in individuals and society not being adequately prepared for future challenges, such as economic downturns or environmental disasters.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals and society should prioritize planning and investing for the future. While the present moment may bring immediate pleasure and satisfaction, the future is what truly matters in the long run. As the American film actor said, "Tomorrow is important and precious," and we should all take this to heart by making decisions today that will benefit us and future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...'Tomorrow is important and precious,' and we should all take this to heart b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58270676692 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12422300816 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9158857864 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.230769231 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256345086656 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940571828184 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073597552588 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145818209251 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680807955264 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.