An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, many people have different views on how individuals and society should allocate their attention between the present and the future. While some believe that the present is more important, others argue that the future should be given priority. In my opinion, I strongly agree that individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present for several reasons.
Firstly, the future is where we will spend the rest of our lives. It is essential to plan and work towards a better tomorrow to secure a bright future. For instance, investing in education and healthcare today will benefit society in the long run by improving the quality of life and creating a better workforce.
Secondly, focusing on the future encourages people to think critically and strategically. By considering the long-term effects of our actions, we can make informed decisions that lead to positive outcomes. This approach promotes a culture of responsibility and accountability, which can benefit society as a whole.
However, it is crucial to acknowledge the importance of the present. While the future should be a priority, we cannot overlook the significance of living in the moment. Therefore, individuals and society should strike a balance between the present and the future.
In conclusion, it is crucial for individuals and society to focus more on the future than the present. By doing so, we can secure a better tomorrow and create a responsible and accountable society. Nonetheless, it is vital to maintain a balance and not overlook the significance of living in the moment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...not overlook the significance of living in the moment. Therefore, individuals and society sho...
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Line 9, column 290, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...not overlook the significance of living in the moment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20384615385 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96241495521 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0815814108 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316791632591 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104214043037 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939975952541 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167292380509 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107818047891 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.