The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in the sea. What are the reasons? What solutions to solve the issue?
It is a public concern that the number of endangered animals is becoming significantly increasing because of human beings around the world. Many people have questioned that the motives behind this issue and some solutions could be taken to address it.
There are several reasons why terrestrial and marine animals are on the verge of extinction. Firstly, animals and plants finding it more difficult and difficult to survive as the ecosystem has been affected by uncontrollable destruction of habits by human beings. Individuals take land for buildings, farming, and timber in forests has rendered species extinct at speeds unprecedented in history. Secondly, humans, due to their industrial, agricultural, or normal day-to-day activities, release an inordinate amount of toxic waste that is eventually dumped into the air, water, or landfills. For example, in Ha Tinh in Viet Nam, Formosa Company exploited harmful waste from oceans, which would lead to the unfortunate disappearance of many kinds of aquatic creatures.
Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle this problem. The first method is that the government should introduce laws to limit devastating behaviors such as littering, illegal dumping, or other environmental offenses. Individuals would be encouraged to utilize public transportation or bikes and companies should filter waste before discharging it into the environment to mitigate air and water pollution. The second solution would be to improve environmental awareness among all sections of society. Educational organizations should have lectures about the importance of maintaining animals as well as biodiversity.
In conclusion, animals are on the brink of extinction because of some reasons, and solutions should be produced soon to tackle this worrying problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68773234201 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11841185144 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0669278556 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158880636096 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532444545322 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396390811198 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963915430072 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03348440541 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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