Animal Testing
Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.”
It is true that testing on animals has been one of the highly controversial issues that attract people’s attention in today’s world. While it can be argued that these tests should be prohibited, there are some people who strongly advocate that they bring a lot of benefits to human-beings. To my opinion, I totally agree with the former point of view. This essay will discuss both sides of the debate.
On the one hand, there are some arguments in favor of the idea that the pros animal testing bring to our life overshadow the cons. Firstly, experiments on animals have made a great contribution to life-saving cures and treatments. It is supposed that most medical breakthroughs in the last 100 years have resulted directly from researches using animals. Secondly, animals are appropriate research subjects because they are similar to humans in many aspects. This can be illustrated by the example that all mammals including humans are descended from common ancestors and have the same set of organs which functions in the same way. As humans and animals are biologically similar, they are both susceptible to condition and diseases such as cardiovascular diseases, cancer and diabetes…
On the other hand, there are some reasons to support the statement that government should impose law on using animals as experiment subjects. The opponents of animal experimentation consider these experiments are cruel and inhumane because animal welfare is as vital as medical research. For instance, a great many animals used in cosmetic experiments are deprived of food and water in a prolonged period of physical restraint. Another issue is that nowadays there are numerous alternative testing methods which can take over from using animals. For examples, artificial human skin made from sheet of human skin cells planted in plastic tubes and wells can create more reliable as well as effective result than animal skin.
In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this issue, and it has still sparked controversy in recent years. As far as I am concerned, I put more emphasis on the idea that animal testing has to be forbidden. People should have further consideration on this issue
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1536643026 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80739007025 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534278959811 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9554912001 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.736842105 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2631578947 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63157894737 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362917275964 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115036939121 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103920127574 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185943955956 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911592056181 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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