Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree or disagree?
With the rise of virtual currencies, it seems that nowadays there is an uprising need for an ungoverned trading market. Tempting as this may sound, such a market I detest, and in this essay, shall give a detailed illustration as to how large of a threat it can pose to the economic situation of many, if not all, countries.
Our current trading market is already filled with fraudulence, which possibly grow in number should the market be no longer governed, leading to the devastation of an economy. In a world where unsafe trading comes to be the norm, trades decrease, trustworthiness becomes rare, and on a larger scale, countries decide to run on their own resources until unable to, refusing to exchange with another country. As far as history has taught mankind, such countries cease to witness improvement done to their economy.
Without a government, a country’s also more likely to meet its economic failure as sectors are unreasonably invested. Without sufficient funds to support agriculture, for instance, Vietnam would have witnessed its agriculture-based economy going towards an inevitable drop. This problem stems from the ever-changing needs of humans, which seem to never scatter across all sectors evenly. Some sectors are prone to attract demand while certain sectors, as in the previous example, while deserving as much demand, fail to become an attraction.
Free trading among countries is, indeed, a dream of many, but as it is much inappropriate to the current worldwide economy, it should not be the goal of today’s mankind. It shall be a possibility, however, once certain achievements, such as world peace and proper education to all, are obtained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17582417582 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95766168043 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5117777413 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.454545455 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116874837844 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452063577996 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442332626501 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698888528657 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461550607098 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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