Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Technological advancements have made human's life far easier. In this era of technology, various professionals and students prefer to work or study by staying back at home using cost-friendly and easy to use modern electronic gadgets. In my opinion, this trend provides more number of advantages with a handful of drawbacks, therefore it is a positive development.
There is a myriad of arguments in favour of my stance. The most telling one lies in the fact that it is more convenient to use for both the groups either workers or pupils. Not only, can they save their time of travelling to school or company and utilize it in a more constructive way for their work or study, but they can also concentrate on their work with more concentration as they do not get tired by travelling to job or school. For example, people working from home or studying tend to get more productive results than people who travel every day to their job or school. Besides, the flexibility the employees or students are provided with by working at home might also play a key role that makes this genre to be a positive development. Individuals who job or learn from home get the opportunity to spend time with family along with earning money or learning something new, which is a much-needed requirement of today's workaholic lifestyle. To illustrate, modern generation has become much busy in their profession and schooling that they bearly get time to have some quality time with family, but the option of job or study from home has helped to resolve this problem to some extent.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned arguments, work or study from home is not without its concerns. Individuals do not get the opportunity to socialize with the people in society and become less interactive as they spend most of their time staying back at home. As a result, they lack communication skills and find it difficult to share their views openly in front of others. For instance, individuals who go to college or companies for their work are found to be more confident to speak than those who prefer to live at home for their work and study purpose.
To summarize, work or study from home provides people with several benefits like flexibility and convenience with few disadvantages. Therefore, the drawbacks of the given trend are no match for its merits.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arious professionals and students prefer to work or study by staying back at home...
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Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k or study by staying back at home using cost-friendly and easy to use modern ele...
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Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n from home get the opportunity to spend time with family along with earning mone...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refore, the drawbacks of the given trend are no match for its merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88161209068 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8779679623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498740554156 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5533610799 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254011901175 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895454440703 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559242800449 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164830641776 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331816975138 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arious professionals and students prefer to work or study by staying back at home...
^^
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k or study by staying back at home using cost-friendly and easy to use modern ele...
^^
Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n from home get the opportunity to spend time with family along with earning mone...
^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...refore, the drawbacks of the given trend are no match for its merits.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88161209068 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8779679623 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498740554156 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5533610799 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254011901175 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895454440703 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559242800449 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164830641776 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331816975138 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.