Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In today's globalized world, people are getting used to do their work or study at home and teach their child to do the same because of cheaper technology devices and the easier way to access. I strongly believe that this will be the significant improvement in children's study process if they learn in the right way.
Firstly, the websites and apps have more interesting frames for children to learn and revise. Moreover, these funny sites help beginner to increase their positive emotional and motivations for learning. For instance, there are some entertaining apps which allow baby girls to put on princesses's makeup and after each stage, the questions about things are required to boost their memories.
Secondly, study from home will help a child to find their best self-study method which including such as revision, writing, memoring. The suitable method improves children's learning rapidly which is not restricted by doing homework or reviewing teacher's lessons like students do.
Finally, let not forget the pivotal role of technology which is the most important part for study from home. The economy development affects the technological development by import-export trade, e-commercial and decrease the technology devices costs. This process made technology became widely available and more accessible for poor families. For instance, Vietnamese children attended school will need at least 20 million vnd per year while learning at home just requires 10 million vnd for a computer which can be used for more than 3 years.
To conclude, the advantages from studying at home are above the disadvantages. However, parents should be aware of the opposite side of technology to find the best way learning from home for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29347826087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74501658411 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7440774773 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335181633589 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120179601539 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569637980691 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182752018076 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591704441874 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.