Art is considered an important part of society as an expression of it’s culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art to focus on art rather than others subjects?
It’s often seen that art play a vital role of a society, for showing culture and other things we can easily exhibit our culture over the world by it. In my opinion children must be learn it because their creative minds will be develop by learning it,but others subjects should be learn besides it.
Firstly, learning art is important to find out creativity of a student, all of students have a creative mind. This creative mind would be come out by art.Studies have shown that those who learn art are very talented. Most people whom love to find creative gift from their beloved person in special occasion,creative students can make creative things and give their beloved person.
Secondly, students who cannot to talk specially young children they didn’t know how to talk they can expose their wishes or their needs by art.And the people who are dumb they cannot talk they also can express their view and anything by art. Even if you go to others country but you don’t know their language you can explain something by it.So, art is best way to explain something.
Finally, we know that art is useful study for children, but others subjects should be focus besides of art because students shoul be know about health and others knowledge. Others subjects makes students perfect they can know general knowledge by others subjects.
In conclusion, art is an essential part of learning art help a children to develop creativity as well express their thoughts beside art should be added others subjects.In a school curriculum shoul have a better opportunity for all subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95131086142 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.482787327 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2910742427 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324218183748 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142415365685 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869593652162 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196719297567 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689643548465 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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