Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages schools should not force them to learn foreign languages To what extent do you agree or disagree

Essay topics:

Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although why foreign languages are learn to hard and so many children not capable to clear that and schools should not force them to take second languages. In my opinion, schools have to emphasis children to learn foreign languages.

There are too many advantages experiences if someone know the second languages. If grown up know second languages they are capable to do international communication in addition to that open opportunities to get international job or work not only that they can apply for international study and also shift to another developed country to leave higher quality of life.

Despite of that English is second most spoken worldwide language and most of the technology is has been developed and developing under this language so it is necessary to know second language in fact of that children can not be pursue at particular level of education without knowing it and it can make break. So that is the only reason to learn it.

In my conclusion, school have to steak with children must learn second language during the academic so they have early opened their dream gates.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
Although why foreign languages are learn to hard and so many children not capabl...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to take second languages. In my opinion, schools have to emphasis children to lea...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
... many advantages experiences if someone know the second languages. If grown up know ...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thout knowing it and it can make break. So that is the only reason to learn it. In ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
... have to steak with children must learn second language during the academic so they ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, in addition, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 185.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98378378378 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73691855114 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.3298620199 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291735506829 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155017405052 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119021556913 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191657657408 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139856841066 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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