The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the belief that investing in young people is the ultimate way for a country to develop in the future. While this may be a comprehensive suggestion, I believe that the development of a country requires different approaches.
It is true that spending more on young people is beneficial for a country since they are going to be the main component of its labour force in the future. By receiving adequate education, skills training and ample opportunities, young adults can be important, productive contributors to society. Specifically, they will be able to make scientific breakthroughs in fields such as technology or medicine, and thus increase their nation's economic stability. However, only spending resources fostering young individuals may not be the wisest course of action, as other age groups also contribute greatly to the development of a country and its society as well as the economy. For example, middle-aged groups, if trained properly and continuously, can also bring about great economic benefits to their nation.
Therefore, I suggest countries consider other practical approaches besides spending resources on the youth. Firstly, it is undeniable that a stable development of a country requires proper investment in infrastructure, including transportation, communication and energy systems. Improvement in these areas will enable efficient movement for people, foster communication between them, as well as provide reliable energy resources, which are of paramount importance to the young generations. In addition, countries should also take into consideration the significance of resources directed towards other age groups. Since older employees have a wealth of experience and specialized knowledge obtained throughout their working lives, it's beneficial to continue investing in them to maintain the stable profits they have delivered.
In conclusion, while there is no doubt that investing in young individuals can benefit countries enormously, spending on various aspects will yield better social and economic stability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75895765472 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2111449018 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0520184471 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0769230769 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239571809422 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882038540079 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809662525618 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150092418737 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513610390263 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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