The best way to solve word’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Driven by a controversial issue, named ecological health, people insist that it has to be a price increment in petroleum for some particular means of transportation such as cars. I, however, entirely agreed that this is an optimum method to environmental problem.
To begin with, there is no denying that when dwellers are under financial pressure due to the cost of fuel, they are expected to alleviate the dependence on fossil fuels. Not only does it reduce the amount of detrimental emission discharged, causing respiratory diseases, but it also balances the figures of oxygen and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. To be specific, according to a survey in a particular area giving top priority to eco-friendly transportation, it is reported that the statistics of carbon footprint per person swiftly plunged by 20%.
On the other hand, it is the alternative renewable sources of energy encouragement that is the main purpose of taking this price rise in to reality. Only after rasing the price of non-renewable energy do inhabitants discover and take advantages of other sustainable energy, which is considered as a green revolution, rehabilitating the atmosphere. For instance, solar, wind, hydroelectric energy have been taken into considerations recently.
Granted, when it comes to prevalent source of energy, fossil fuels still remain dominant, occupying the majority of world energy use. Nevertheless, it is a crucial factor triggering the environmental degradation.
To conclude, the increment in cost of fuel could divert energy rather than rely on fuels and creates opportunity for the development of green power. Therefore, price increase is in urgent need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45593869732 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22461540005 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5974769744 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145984817629 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049487096029 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391216878994 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757384208734 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364186843294 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.