Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
Provide relevant examples if necessary.
Nowadays, with the booming advent of economy, many believe that having a well-earned job is much more crucial, whereas having pleasure and joy while you work is considered to be less than necessary. I personally agree that it would be better to get your dream job, rather than getting stuck behind a paper desk just for better salary, which will be discussed below.
To begin with, many people would say that achieving their dream job is a monumental moment in their life, since the dedication to their cause has overwhelmed the need for personal wealth. Furthermore, it is non-negotiable that highly devoted workers are more likely to be successful in their field of work, which not only results in better productivity, but also set the bar higher for others competitive companies. For example, a target-related workload would be easily resolved with a dedicated workforce, who would always come to work with enthusiast and positive vibes. With that sense of fulfilment, it will be a great drive to push yourself to another level of career growth further down the future road.
But on the other spectrum, it is undeniable that money is essential for our own livelihood, but it’s important to know that money is not the answer to everything. In other words, I must emphasize that it is much more pleasant to pursue what you are interested in, rather than follow the path of those who put salary first on the list. Scientists and researchers are examples of those who made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were deeply passionate about their profession.
In conclusion, I believe that if you excel at something you love, the future of having a high income without joining the rat race might be possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93559322034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69849245581 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603389830508 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.6513691303 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 145.6 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15139072596 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563827358251 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570146114811 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926402906666 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553512642532 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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