Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
These days bullying in schools become an urgent concern of community and a hot spot of media. Several reasons for this issue, as well as a couple of measures, will be discussed in this essay.
This problem seems to stem from three main causes, namely lack of parents’ attention, schools’ schedules and technological boom. Firstly, parents, nowadays, are so stressful under pressure of earning for living that they do not have enough time to look after and play with their children. This leads to the shortage of affectionate link between parents and offspring. As a result, children become alone in their own family and disorientate their behavior. The second reason is that schools overvalue academic subjects such as math, physics, biology instead of paying right attention to civic education which shapes students’ traits. Consequently, children seem difficult to distinguish between goodness and badness, and they consider bullying as a way of exposing their strength. Eventually, the very quick advance of technology helps children approach action movies or fighting games easily, which is without the control of adults. As a consequence, they are affected negatively by these and perform them again with their friends cold-bloodedly.
There are several measures to tackle this issue. Firstly, although parents are occupied by their daily routines, they should arrange their schedules to spend their valuable time with their offspring so that children feel family’s affection. Besides, they guide their offspring to work wonder in both study and ethics. In addition, schools should balance the importance of academic lessons and moral ones which contribute significantly to building characteristics of young generations. Finally, authorities of technological products should put stricter regulations on violent films and fighting games. Besides, parents also supervise closely children when they use these devices.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable the fact that schools’ bullying is widespread quickly, which needs to join hands of families, schools, and authorities to prevent it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70031545741 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98762986188 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637223974763 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4641513779 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.294117647 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580048991787 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211667764411 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242242404837 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458440479101 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223420190728 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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