Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air
tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more
popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way
outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any
relevant examples from your own knowledge or
experience.
Today, with the huge development of technology and the internet, online shopping is taking a sizable part in the e-commerce field. Today, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and give some relevant examples.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why purchasing items online such as books, air tickets and groceries. First of all, when the pandemic is becoming viral, people have to follow social distancing, everything from education, working or even shopping are moving online. People tend to purchase items online and the prime preseason for this is they can search for a variety of products at a reasonable price and they can be delivered right away to your home. Secondly, you can avoid sales pressure from the sellers. If you buying things offline you can freely choose what you want.
On the other hand, there are a number of disadvantages of shopping online that people should take into consideration. The principle is that there will be a negative environmental impact of packing and gas on the items. When it had delivered for a long time the products may be deformed and destroy the products inside. In addition, there will be shipping problems and delays sometimes. Thus, it may increase the fee of shipping. For instance, last month when I purchased a book online and because of social distancing, the product was delayed for one week and when the shipper delivered it to me, he getted confuse about my address even I bought for several times and it cost 2 weeks that I could get the item.
In conclusion, purchasing product online could bring about certain benefits but it's negative consequences should not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96762589928 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68583659854 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9042177657 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14828391545 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456854510099 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394444045356 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787606160274 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558770615448 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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