Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, with the improvement of technologies, especially the Internet platform, people can shop much easier at any time and everywhere. This lead to the increasing of online shopping, which brings a lot of benefits. Otherwise. it also leaves some drawbacks. However, from my point of view, the advantages of this increasing trend are way more than the disadvantages.
To start with, Online shopping saves our time as well as our effort. Instead of going out for buying, all we have to do is lying on our bed, surfing on any market we have found. And after that, what we have bought are already on the way to us in just a few minutes. Moreover, the price is more reasonable on the internet than in the actual shop due to the discounts, free shipping, and others. With the same quality, we pay a small amount of money. For instant, rather than a 5$ shirt in the store, I only have to pay 2$ for the same one thanks to the convenient of the Internet.
However, Scamming is one of the biggest disadvantages of shopping online. The pictures can be stunning, attractive but the actual products are terrible. It is very difficult to evaluate product's quality just by what they post on online market. Coming to the store can let you feel and touch the fabric which is much more reliable.
In conclusion, we cannot deny that Internet shopping has helped our life a lot. Therefore, it is easy to understand why shopping on the internet become prevailing all over the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
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Suggestion: It
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
... shirt in the store, I only have to pay 2$ for the same one thanks to the convenie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65900383142 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65941233736 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6606105319 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.0 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186186637625 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551539158812 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522434327811 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11054009762 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298384046373 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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