Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, on the ground of the Internet widespread, the popularity of shopping online is being cultivated. It is my perspective that its’ drawbacks are surpassed by bright sides. The reason for it are twofold.
On the one hand, buying goods via the Internet gives shoppers numerous benefits. Firstly, it is highly possible that purchased prices would be lower. Indeed, thanks to saving a considerable off-site rental fee, sellers are bestowed upon the chances to reduce selling price. Therefore, it also costs buyer smaller proportion of budget in comparison with traditional shopping ways. In addition, the convenience and flexibility in ordering is another advantages of this buying method. It is clear that people could purchase regardless the distance and timing. Let ‘s take officers working on shifts as a stark example, due to their fixed working schedule, had it not been for the availability of shopping application on high tech devices like smart phone or laptop, these people would have never shopped in their working time.
On the other hand, shopping online is disadvantageous in some ways. Initially, the quality of goods could be far from its’ advertisement. In fact, it is possible that sellers have motivations to overstate the advances of their products. Without touching to real items, not only are buyers likely miss-directed by the faked images but they might also choose over/under sized items. Further and even more significantly, payment online processes require a wide range of private information which threaten to personal confidentiality of customers. For instance, recently in Vietnam, thousands of residents are leak their mobile phone numbers and home addresses to crime due to using an online shopping application.
All in all, while I accept that online shopping contains both risks and benefits, it is my belief that its’ pros are more remarkable than cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39534883721 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89137340656 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641196013289 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.875738099 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5294117647 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131071587183 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375996515197 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434751270069 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768031865098 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00919139165325 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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