Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Now a days, people are buying every single product from the internet. Without checking them they are buying in hefty measure. Not only the things about the households, people are also booking train/ flight/bus tickets online.
In the earlier, people used to go to a super market or a store to buy them . Only after seeing the standards of the product people used to buy them. They used see the vegetables where healthy or not.There used to be a long que were people used to stand for hours to get a ticket for a movie or any other transport if we are moving out on a vacation. Now a days, people are also paying their internet bill, telephone bill as well as their electricity bill on the internet.
There are advantages as well as disadvantages . The disadvantages for these are People these days are becoming more lazy postponing their works cause of the Internet that is "ONE CLICK JOB DONE!" . The number of responsibilities have decreased gradually. Number of people moving out of their houses have been reduced. There are advantages too.Now a days in a house both male and female are working .So it must be difficult to take out a day of their curriculum for the households billing and all. So it easy for them to complete these works in a single step.
But people should not rely on them completely because they have to do more hard work when compared to smart work . In my house people in the olden days used to go in family for buying the households to take any tickets. But now they are doing there works individually even the shopping .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60791366906 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58067159848 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514388489209 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6570093195 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139394237344 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524602579026 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347788832352 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928759090151 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148815378415 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.