Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
In the digitalisation world, people are very technophiles. Hence, shopping online is very popular in the technological era. such as books, flight ticket and groceries. There are both pros and cons of this situation. If asked, the merits of this situation surpass the demerits. My inclination is discussed in ensuring paragraphs
Discussing the advantages, shopping online is the biggest that is time-saving. This is because people are very stuck in their busy work as well as their job so they could not take time for shopping hence, they choose the shopping online on behalf of the shopping market. Furthermore, when buying online they give good discount and cashback offer. This means that in the technological world there are lots of online shopping website available on the internet So, the increasing competition they always give the biggest offers and more discount. This is a good beneficial for buying online instead of traditional shopping, For example, amazon always gives good offers and a huge discount at the end of the month.
Moreover, people purchasing online anywhere and anytime. The reason being, people can buy air-ticket,bus-ticket and railway ticket can buy online at midnight or any kind of emergency instead of a ticket book at the airport, bus stop or railway station.
On the contrary side, there are some drawbacks too. To initiate, cloning website. To add to this, hacker most of the time hacking high demanding websites to hack where people are more transaction online and stolen a personal data and thus, this is a high risk when people are purchasing online.
To conclude, there are few demerits such as the high risk of hacking but there are many merits to save the time consuming on the busy world as well as a huge offer too. However, My argument proves the advantageous of this situation more than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , bus-ticket
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07843137255 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85361303471 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6931441287 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4117647059 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217916556307 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626053174636 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527904374791 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114567047318 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203866468826 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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